All Comments on 'Lord Reginald's Heir Pt. 02'

by Charlottestories

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BiggaluteBiggaluteabout 6 years ago
Very Good

Just read both parts, they flow beautifully and you get the language just right, giving a feel for the period but not too over the top. There's almost a gentle eroticism about them that I really enjoyed, thanks for sharing x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fantastic Story

This author knows how to bring the erotic romance! I love how Charlottestories sets the context of the evolving dilemma of Lord Reginald's inability to sire his beautiful young bride. The innocent, bucking winner of the village's 'Olympics' is cleaned up and paired with the bride for a night, thinking she is but a maidservant and a token prize. This lowers any heated expectations while stoking their fires within. The bride, in confiding to Maggie, a castle servant played by Charlottestories, describes in achingly beautiful detail how she overcomes her own innocence to drive the two unintended lovers to slowly explore and discover each other's body. The explicit love making that sparks after the two of them sheepishly unite is hot and descriptive. Charlottestories knows what she's doing.

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