All Comments on 'Lords of the Wyld: Celestine Bound'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
exquisite writing

thank you. looking forward to the next set of chapters. the writing flows exquisitely like velvety chocolate. the character elements that contribute to the conflict are not quite as developed or compelling in my opinion so i don't have as much emotional attachment to the heroine. perhaps because she does not appear to experience peril. but the promise of danger as the story unfolds whets the appetite. thanks again for a beautifully written story.

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