All Comments on 'Lori and Jonah: A Seduction'

I loved this story so far and can't wait to read the rest of it.

Please finish this story.

a second story is in the works, please keep nagging so that i make sure i finish it! thanks for the feedback too :), i love it

A second chapter is definitely in order!

Very good read. Keep it up:)

I need to know what this man's cock is like...PLEASE! :)

A great story darling, the dialogue is refreshingly superb - and his growling made me growl!

The second chapter of Lori And Jonah was just posted!! Thank you for reading the first, I hope you enjoy the second, :). Please vote, comment, and/or send feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=481704

~IndianFire~

Thank you for reading.

yes, of course it is a fantasy, but the focus is so narrow as to make it unconvincing. This girl, whom is apparently intelligent based on her grades can apparently openly get off in class without being noticed or smelled!, She is wealthy and has no visible parents, and lusts after a perfect teacher who also happens to be wealthy. Her relationships with other people revolve around a superficial football hierarchy.

A lovely read so far.Well written,very plausible.I went thru a near similar experience with a course mate.Thoroughly enjoyable.Keep up the good work.

Omg!! I love it!!