All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What a cliff hanger!

Can't wait to find out wha the surprise is!! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

The torture of waiting is almost unbearable! Please good sir, post the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Please post more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Outstanding!

First class writing! Well done! Great love story! PLEASE, don't follow some of your writing peers and hurt or kill Lori in the next chapter! There are enough cruel writers on this site...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing

So brilliant. I follow this now with anticipation. Please post the next chapter :)

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