All Comments on 'Lori Takes On...'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot action

Great story of your wife getting the fucked hard that she know she rally wants! Once you can get your wife in this mindset the fun just begins!

bingochalicebingochaliceover 16 years ago
I LOVE it!

I love the way this has been written - I'm a guy, but you made me feel the wife's desire to be completely filled. It's fantastic to read a story where a woman goes all-out to feel as good as she can.

I'm so hard from reading this I feel like I'll cum hard if I touch myself - that's how good the story is!

Please have a look at my story and comment on it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not good . . . third person writing . . .

. . . comes off as impersonal and clinical.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh my gosh

This story made me so fleebing wet I can't even take it. Amazing. I must go play now. Loooooove it. Thank you.

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