All Comments on 'Lorri'

good writing! it was just like being there;

write more!

story was very good cant wait to see more of your writing

Well done and love the british terminology and slang.

thank you

I just loved it. You're all gorgeous & sexy & I'm in love with the characters!

Thanks for the great story. You must be one of the luckiest guys on the planet to have such fine luck with a succession of hot women. I too, love these characters and hope you'll give us more of the same.

Honestly, for me the biggest draw of this story was how 'in-the-mind' of the character I was. A pleasantly dry wit and distinctly appropriate aside comments gave him a very human quality, very un-stroke-story. The point of the story was well done, but without the clever descriptions, it would have been unspectacular. As it stands... spectacular.

good story!

Loved this story and loved the way it was written. Would love to hear about your other adventures. Will look out for them. x

This has to be one of your best stories so far. It is very well written and highly charged. I like the way you have built it up to the climax. This is much better than some writer who jump straight to the fuck and climax, with no story in-between. Please write more.

Thanks for sharing.

Another hot story and very plausible.