All Comments on 'Losing Control'

Excellent build and development of characters. VERY HOT! Please write more!

Nice job. I enjoyed reading this. You created a very interesting charactor in Lisa. Please keep writing.

I love the power without force aspect! You are the only author I've read who can do this... you should try another story with this theme, maybe?

I think it is incredibly erotic when pure lust overcomes a person's good sense and inhibitions and makes them act in ways they never thought they would. This story played out that theme to perfection. In some ways I'd like to see additional chapters. But, really, I'm not sure anything could add to the heat of this story. Nicely done!

Wow, that was hot! Loved it, more please!

Fantastic job! The story was descriptive and well paced. Although I did think the flashbacks got a little lengthy right when things were heating up