All Comments on 'Losing My Balance Ch. 01'

its a great start to a series.. you got me hooked already.. such a tease... grins

can't wait to read the next chapter

well done

Nice story..just a suggestion- pls don't have too much gap between the chapters

You had me going, until she was so rudely woken up from her dream. You really have to hurry up with more chapters

Well written like good wine

Wow, that was pretty much perfection. You really had me going, there isn't a dry spot in my panties. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, hurry! ;)

True talent. Keep em coming. Great job! Don't rush the Character development. That's what makes it believable.

I'm hanging off a cliff on this one. What a surprise ending. It has you wanting more. More please! And great job by the way.

Great twist with the ending where she wakes up from her dream. Would love to see more of the tension between Irri and Bee - this could very easily be prolonged into a wonderful & lengthy story. I look forward to reading more!! Thank you =D

Just read this story, and gotta say, very much enjoyed it! I would love to see this story continue, any thoughts as to when part 2 might be coming out??

Thanks!

Thanks everyone for the lovely compliments! After quite a few months, I've just submitted my next chapter. Thanks for your patience xxx

Just wow... You just posted part 4 of this series, for which I am very happy because I found another wonderful author to read. Thank you for sharing your time, and your thoughts with all of us.

Christi

Very well written story. I love how it turned out to be a dream. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

Really good start. Needs to be a good long series.