All Comments on 'Losing My Balance Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Omg! Next chapter.

HeisenhugHeisenhugover 8 years ago

Oh no, no way you post something that tasty and that short then not post the next bit for months, right? You're not that cruel, right? Right? ¬_¬

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh nonono

You cant stop here.

Not Fair!!!!

ch 1 was cool, but this one is HOT, and should not be stopped at such a cliff hanger. Please, dont wait such a long time before next one

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Nooooo!!!! HeartnSole, you show neither, ending the story this way. Lol, please don't leave us hanging

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
No dont let it end like that.

I loved this story , please continue it .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Don't make it too long before you post another chapter. Please!! You just can't stop it here.

HeartnSoleHeartnSoleover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the comments!

You all make me sound so cruel! (Glad you're enthusiastic though ;) I'm working on it, I promise! xxx

vggirl08vggirl08over 8 years ago

hmmmm.....I LOVE all of your stories! Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You are so cruel though ;) !!!!!!

vggirl08vggirl08over 8 years ago
1 Request

That they make slow passionate teasing love to Marian Hill (Lips) 😜 . There is something about the way you write that just excites me so please hurry up.

HeartnSoleHeartnSoleover 8 years agoAuthor

anon- Okay, maybe I'm a bit cruel.... >.> Hopefully in the enjoyable way!

vggirl- I'm glad you enjoy my stories!! And hmm not a bad idea... I'll find a way to work something like that in when it gets to that point ;) Good pick, one of my favorite songs by her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

These are awesome :)

Looking forward to reading the next one

eshortie103eshortie103over 8 years ago
Another small request

Since you already teased us with it lol. Can you please have irri ride Amber? Oh and five stars by the way. I always enjoy reading your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I lived the way it ended. Great story! Five stars!

_danielle80s__danielle80s_over 8 years ago

as usual you are such a tease H&S.. this one has been a long time coming and listen to you readers, don't make us wait for too long. i love the different POV between Irri and Bee's side. well written and so sexy. but so short on the strip dance lol i want more details. great job kudos to you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
ok

yes she had better have some luck, her friend must really be mad at her, not so much about that, but her being lied too

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Oh my!

An excellent continuation of this story! Thank you!

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