by Shelf911
I prefer more character development in a story .But this a fine first effort on this site and well worth 5 stars .
good story until you had an eight inch penis in the story. Why did you ruin it?
Good story.
While I agree that the use of cock size in most all of the stories is unnecessary for the story, this time was the exception because it was used to compare it to her late husband's cock.
Good story line - but the bit about the narrator's deceased husband having had a five inch cock, but her new lover has one that's eight inches detracts mightily from the story
An eight inch cock is a very great statistical unlikelihood - but more to the point, how does she know? Has she measured it? Did she measure her deceased husband's? For story telling all that matters is that the new one is longer and thicker than the only other one that she's had - just as it doesn't matter that we know everybody's age down to the exact year, et cetera et cetera
Slightly rushed build-up, great description of feelings, doesn't need the stats (H H Morant says it well).