All Comments on 'Losing My Virginity Ch. 01'

story is good

but u could changed after that fight between the parents ur mom cheated with big man whom u seen them n so on could have been good.

nah dude ur storyline is good...deviates from the norm of cheating mom caught and ahd to give it up

5 stars

The beginning was a little bit slow, but I understood why. As for your writing style, your flow is natural; you have good structure and great usage of descriptions. This is a really good piece. As for future reference materials: I have a big thing for dry humping. Also, lactation problems that start out innocent-ish (but definately crossing a line) and end in sex. I would like to read about a sexually frustrated mother and her son having a tickle fight. He gets a boner, she feels it, and sorta invountarily pushes up against it. Confused, but aroused, he pushes back. They don't think, they don't say anything, they just start to dry hump. They aren't looking directly at eachother and are too confused to grope. So they just kinda are caught in what they are doing and how it feels to good to stop. Then one way or another it progresses to sex. Hope that helps! I would sure love to read about that! Keep up the great work. <3

V.S.

Go ahead fuck your parents