All Comments on 'Loss to Love Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I get you want t build characters, but I also get why others are saying this is dragging. I'm not one for wham bam but I just read all chapters thus far, its very flat, you need some emotion to build characters but there hasn't been much. Another thing,his best friend moves to new York and he is suddenly mr popularity?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome story!

This one is so good. Waiting for the next chapter! Thank you for the awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
on the edge of my chair

Awwww! Why you stopping there??....to the person who says drew is mr popular all of sudden, aren't you paying attention? His only popular to the football jocks because of nick. And not everyone is talking to him, only enough for the story to move along.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oooooooooooooooh!!!

can`t wait.....I hope, both will do the only right thing

musicfreakmusicfreakover 9 years agoAuthor
You can't please everyone

And that's okay. I mean if you think that the characters lack emotion then sure. I don't think so, but I guess to each their own. I mean your comment was constructive...kinda, so I'm fine with it. I mean constructive criticism is how we improve after all. I can go through why I think there is emotion but really, if you don't feel it, you won't, so I shall not.

As for drew being popular, as another person stated, he isn't really popular by a huge extent. His popularity is kinda rubbed off from Nick rather than he himself being popular. I mean he's not like getting invited to parties or what so I don't think he went from zero to hero in that sense.

To all those who are enjoying the story, I don't really have anything to say other than thanks. I say that almost every chapter I think you guys get the point. Haha.

Oh and FYI, I will be going on vacation in the next few weeks so I may or may not reply to comments in that period.

Sappho1980Sappho1980over 9 years ago
Love!

Keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
When will the next chapter be available?

When will the next chapter be available? on tender hooks here!!! can you just post them all on at the same time? please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
its up to lit. they have it already complete.. read all the commrnts young friend

they have it already complete.. read all the comments young friend

musicfreakmusicfreakover 9 years agoAuthor
Yep, what the previous commenter said

The whole story is completed and published. Lit sets the dates they are made public. Their policy on controlling the number of stories each day so none get drowned out. It's an effective system so I'm all for it. All these chapters apart from the last one being chapter 11 has been given a date. Only chapter 11 is still pending. What I'm hoping is that it will be approved in the next few days so there will not be a break in updates. Yes so a new chapter everyday until the last chapter

mikeyb85mikeyb85over 9 years ago
O my word

I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't make us wait too long!!!

Headhunter22Headhunter22over 9 years ago
More!!!!

I think it is moving along just fine. I like your characters. I have read many stories on here. Some are all sex and that is ok but I like the stories like yours the best. You keep teasing us with just 2 pages at a time and leave us hanging. More please!!!😄

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Such a great story - love it!!!

So glad chapters seem to be uploading daily. Hope the next instalment will be tomorrow`:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what a awesome romance

but honestly you are such a teaser to write it that way.. thank you for a beautiful story..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I love this story please don't end it. It getting goooooood.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Cliffhangers

Be dammed!!! :)

This one made my tummy flip! Eagerly awaiting more!!

Ty for submitting so frequently!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Um... Just guessing here, but i feel like Drew's father and Nick's father can have a story...

Just sayin'

Awesome story!

musicfreakmusicfreakover 9 years agoAuthor
Haha well

You won't really think a story between Nick and Drew's dads will work out once you get to the end of the story. *hint hint*

jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
YES !!!!! THERE'S MORE !!!!

Thank you so much, I love this story and can wait to see what happens next btw great cliff hanger

Petef52Petef52about 9 years ago
Wow

Just gets better and better!

PleasepleasePleasepleasealmost 8 years ago
To each his own but I like it:)

Nice story and a pleasant change of pace. There's a saying where I come from, "Opinions are like __________, everyone's got one."

Keep you head up kiddo, not everyone has the same taste. That said, you're doing a great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A lovely tale

Many congratulations on a lovely story.

Ps to the Nazi grammar police who make errors in their own critical comments : get a life sweeties.

Keep the flag flying. A huge hug from Spain

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 6 years ago

I just can't stop reading, I'm binge reading. Hooked, loving it thank you. OMG Nick

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