by musicfreak
its really really awesome story.. thank you so much for this beautiful masterpiece..!!
I loved the story, and reading the part when drew lost his mom, damn, I had teary eyes, you're AMAZING! thank you!
Excellent! Rivals "The New Kid." Please continue writing, you really have a lot of potential to continune to develop your craft! Thanks!
Beautiful ending to a great story! :-)
I'm hoping for a sequel about Drews dad. Would love to hear if he will "stay straight" or if he will allow himself the pleasure of beeing with a man.
Please write us a new story soon. ;-)
Ahhhh I love this story from the beginning to the end. Thank you for such a story of ture love.
Just another great story from you! Loved it from start to finish. Strong characters and story! Cant wait for your next one!!
it is 5 stars, although I missed a long serious conversation about the stupid break-up between them.
I loved this story, and all of your others. The only thing I would change is perhaps adding a chapter between the one where they get together and finding out they live happily ever after. I would like to know more about their lives together/more about them as a couple. If I recall, I think I wished this had been the case with your other stories as well. But again, I really love all your stories and hope that you'll keep writing.
Are there going to be any more chapters where nick and drew get married
Love this story so much even though I'm a very much straight and married female
I love this series, I love the intensity of the characters. Seriously wonderful I do hope to hear about their college years and upcoming marriage...
Lots of ups and downs, but that does reflect life. Good characters, good plot and a nice flow. One or two points I had a problem which but they were, in the scheme of things, minor. I liked this story as a whole and look forward to more.
a love story with happy end is hotter than "Ernie got his first time three cock in is mouth, while Bronko raped his ass". So nice, I will read it again right now.
I love the simplicity with which you've done this, I loved the same from another of your creations too. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
This has to be hands down the best love story I've read in awhile. I hope to find my own Nick one day.
Well I guess now all I can say is thanks for reading this. I'm really happy you guys liked it and the few points that were brought up about how the story could have been better, I agree when I look back in retrospect.
I'm planning on writing a new story soon which will be a little different from my current stories. Hint, it might be cross genre. All I will say is I'm a huge sci fi fan. Lol
Personally I'm still really happy how I wrote this story, regardless of some bad feedback but I think it's good for a writer to stand by their works so that what I do.
Thanks again for reading my works. If not for you guys, I won't actually be writing much at all.
What more can i say. Can't wait for the next story.
I am so very happy that you wrote this story, and glad that I rode all the way to the conclusion. I did think that, after three years' time, maybe Nick had developed SOME hair on that gorgeous chest, something for Drew to rake his fingers through. But they seem so happy and fulfilled, so much in love, that they a can have all the years that stretch out before them. Thankfully, Drew realized it is more important to enjoy what he has in the here and now than worry about the future.
Are there going to be any more chapters about Drew and nicks wedding
Love this story have been staying up all night reading it
What can I say but loved it. Update the guys lives family, love, kids. Keep up the good work.
I think I understand why this story was not rated as highly as some of your others. It had a good premise and a good beginning. But I think both the characterization and story were a bit lacking. He was the second main character, but Nick wasn't well-developed at all. I felt like I barely knew him. Drew was much more relatable, but he was a bit whiny. The story suffered because everything was too perfect. I found it weird that everyone was so supportive, from both of Nick's parents to Drew's dad to Nick's ex-girlfriend and all their friends. The entire football team watched them kiss and cheered? That's just a bit too unrealistic for me. Not to mention the fact that both of their dads are gay, as well.
I'm sorry if my review feels like one big complaint. I'm just disappointed. I liked the beginning of the story so much that I expected to love the whole story. I do plan on trying your other stories, though. You definitely have talent.
It's perfect. Iwish I was either Drew or Nick😊
very good series
thought i was going to have to beat u when they broke up
but u redeemed yourself.
good story can't wait for your next one
As usual all your stories are intense and draw the reader in. I am so pleased that Drew overcame all his fears and they are happy together. Can't wait to see what you come up with next
Wonderful romance! I loved how Drew was oblivious to Nick's feelings. I really could feel it. I, too, thought I was going to have to hurt you with the break up. I had this trepidation that Drew's dream was a premonition that something bad was going to happen to Nick. I was ecstatic with how you need the story. Now, I have to check out other stories you have written!
this is a great and touching story . i have read it from start to finish today 6 hours ive been reading . tears screaming at the computer laughing no house work done .on my day off. .... i would send you feed back but i cant as this site wont let me register. so from big j great wonderful compelling read. a few spelling errors but by far the best read for a long time well done you x x x x i hope to see more from you ..
Just read all 11 chapters straight through. You are now on my fave author list for sure!..Now onward to your other stories....can't wait....
I read your SciFi lunar story yesterday and then your older stories in order, starting with your first one and ending with this one. They are all so much fun! 5 stars every single one! I know I keep repeating myself but I'm so happy I found you after you were gone for 2 years. Now I can look forward to more stories in the near future. Especially the spin-off for lunar... :)
Hmm... maybe I just read your stories all over again... starting right now! ;)
I felt the need to reply to you on one of my older stories because you left quite a few comments on my older stories. Lol. Anyway I'm really happy you liked my stories and I'm sure you're glad you found me only after my hiatus. Lol. Anyway, I'm super glad for a new fan. You're awesome.
These 11 chapters have been wonderful. Great writing, and so much emotion. If you expanded on it, this story would make a great novel!
I love the chemistry between them.
The ending is so wonderful.
I am hooked to your stories.
Just like to say I loved every chapter of this tale, even shed a tear at a few places.
You had me on my toes, thinking, please don't make the wrong choice, had a tear in my eyes as well...Well done
Fucking Amazing... I have to agree with you and the other readers,.. This could pass as your best work.. Not that I've read your other stories, which I plan to do after I post this comment... Thank you very much.. I loved your story...
Just done a binge read of the whole lot! It's now 2.30 am and I've got work in the morning! Lol well worth the dark circles I'll be sporting tomorrow! Look forward to more!
Great story start to finish. Lite on the sex end but the love more than makes up for that. 5 + stars for this story.
Just read your story. Enjoyed it emencely! Thank you so much. Keep up the good work.
I've read this several times and I still fall in love with these boys every time! Great job!
I've dealt with the loss of my mother, and at times think love isn't possible, but this story gives me hope! Thank you so much man!
I've enjoyed this story so, so, much. It would have to be in the top 2 I've read ever. The way you crafted the story, the frailty of us all, love, fear, loss.... and that person we all need on our journey thru life, thank you.
I abso-freaking-lutely ADORED this story!!!! Thank you for the epilogue. I’m so happy Drew and Nick lived happily ever after!
Glad to see that Nick fucked Drew in this chapter and they are versatile, each expressing their love in many ways. I have to point out an inconsistency that’s bothering me about the descriptions on Nick’s big cock. Earlier when they first had sex, it was said that Nick’s cockhead was the narrowest part of his thick monster. But in this chapter it was twice referred to as a big mushroom head - clearly not a narrow, pointed dick. Just bothered me. Maybe I’m the only one…. Would love to read more about their college years and their married years!
Readers? I hope you came this far, to this happy ending. Goodness Author, this was a delight that I finished in 2021 on a rainy night in Tennessee. Five stars times ten...
For the first time reading here, I cried when I realized Nick was going to propose. Congrats! YOU did that. Awesome story. Thank you!
I accidentally found this story and really enjoyed it. I hope you revist them when they get married.