All Comments on 'Lost Baggage'

Loved the way you described everything. Very nice writing.

would be better with a second chapter.

Very imaginative! It doesn't need a second chapter, the imaginative dangle at the end is much more provocative.

I liked this story very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.

he had been honest with her at the door. Told her he had located her luggage and it was on it's way back from Maine, but . . . he had wanted to see her and . . . .

Honesty is a much better way to begin a relationship.

OK read, but somehow just wasn't that entertaining.

This isn't ROMANCE, more Erotic coupling