All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 35'

I love this series. Thank you for writing this.

Know i haven' t really been letting you know how I feel about this yarn, so let me say"Excellent, thanks for posting it here on our Lit site.

Yeah it is good but where is the human shelby?

With teleporting capability, why is it taking 'several hours' for the Sentries to make planet fall? Doesn't add up.

Hartwell should be court-martialed for desertion in the face of the enemy."Oh., I've got to run right the fuck now to save my sister! Of course, the Creagons will be killing/ eating EVERYONE'S sister if the fleet doesn't stop them. Nice if the Prime was actually PRESENT for the battle?? But hey, the Emperor should spend his time reviewing centuries-old paperwork and enforcing non-fraternization regulations. I'm surprised he's leading the charge and not doing R & D instead. Oh, you still need line by line editing. Speaking of R & D, how about cobbling up some hyperdrive/ trans-drive drones to deliver a MIRV attack of those super fireball missiles that worked so well in the last alien attack?

Just sayin'

Anon56

Anon