All Comments on 'Lost in a Legend Ch. 01'

So far, love it. Can't wait for the rest.

This is really fun. An intriguing voice and well-done action, plus a set-up that leaves me wanting to know what he's just gotten into. :)

thats the best first chapter i'Ve read in a long time. can't wait for the next.

Please continue ASAP....

Written just like a GI speaks. Love it.

Contiue march! More more more.

Where are we.......

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You've got one hell of a start here. Keep up the good work, you've set the bar high :).

This has massive potential.

You've got me hooked. I love the humor, you've done a great job getting the reader into John's head, wonderful descriptions, and a good sex scene. I would like for them to be longer in the future though, and some anal sex would be great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work and please finish chapter 2 as soon as you can

A story with some small spark of potential and judging by the date the author posted it… Yet another one story wonder that seems to be clogging up this site.

Very nice start! I look forward to reading more.

You should really Finnish this Tory.

Please finish this it was very ducking good so far, I love stories like this one pls pls pls write more!

is a crushing disappointment - not the story, but rather that it does not continue and ends.

another not finish story

Good story so far. But not finished!!! I know I'll be thinking about this as I fall asleep tonight and making up my own version. But my imagination is limited, that's why I read and can't write.

Wish the 'Finish the damn story' guy did adventure stories LOL.

2011 ffs has the author disappeared with a wolf as well