All Comments on 'Lost in Eros 2: The Forest 04'

by BradentonLarry

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I'm really annoyed that the vines didn't do anything to Don. Other than that I'm really liking this series.

BradentonLarryBradentonLarryalmost 5 years agoAuthor
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I get that objection. I was trying to do something clever here, something of an allegory of rape culture, but in retrospect I don't think it worked, and I think I should have done things differently, including having Don violated as well.

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