by SouthernPeaches
If this is the story that you mentioned in the thread. It ain't too bad. I think it needs a bit of 'filling out'. You got the sex bit OK, but there are a great many unanswered questions about it.
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HP
Interesting, erotic, and well written. Can't ask for much more from a Lit submission.
I really like the story I thought it was gripping and entertainment. It's obvious the people who have not read it may have commented on it with negative comment.