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Click here"That doesn't make sense," Wolfe took it all in on its value.
"I told you about me dreams..." she started and hugged her knees to her chest again. "About Silas..."
"Aye," Wolfe nodded, remembering and taking this with more seriousness.
"When I dream of him, I'm chained up in a room, and he's hurting me." She admitted. This was painful for her to talk about. "It feels real, I know my dreams and this wasn't a dream. But when I wake I cannot tell which is real." Wolfe remembered that night in their room at the Monastery, and the times she talked about her dreams of Silas. There was a link now – this business of sorcery, demon's blood, and The Mischievous's dreams all fell into place with Silas. Wolfe rose slowly and went to sit on her bed next to her. He placed a hand on her shoulder.
"What did he do to you?" He said with all seriousness. There was a protective side to him that came out rarely. And when she dared to look him in the eyes she saw there was a righteous indignation there that would forgive all the trespasses they had made against one another for the sake of avenging this one evil. In that look, she found the part of him she could trust – she found her wolf.
- COMMENTS
cittranabout 11 years agoI'd say you're doing much better than when you first started writing on here. I noticed a few errors, but not so many, which is about what I'd expect. And if you're editing this on your own, I'm even more impressed. (I really would recommend getting an editor though, if only because people tend to spot the errors of other people faster than they spot their own -- it's because your mind knows what you MEANT to write, so it just fills in the blanks/mix-ups.)
Anyways, I'm sure you could just write a sample paragraph or two (doesn't even need to be part of this story), which has some intentional errors in it. Or, better yet, you could have a potential editor proofread one of your previous submissions and send it to you with the corrections. This will dissuade any people who don't know English grammar & spelling from asking to 'edit' your work -- or trying to find out what the next chapter is, for that matter, as one of the authors I frequently read has come across that problem -- and it will get you people who actually want to help you improve your work.
(Were I not in college, I'd volunteer myself. Although because I'm writing on my own, I try not to read other people's things as much; I don't want to unintentionally plagiarise someone's work.)
Also, I enjoyed this chapter very much as well. I'll admit to being initially confused over who the red-haired woman was, but then it got cleared up. *wink*.
Belderieverabout 11 years agoAuthorYeah... I need to proofread more. Sorry folks, I'll be more thorough next time.
