All Comments on 'Lost in the Light Ch. 10'

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cittrancittranover 10 years ago
oh sweet buddha that was fucking hot.

Also, I can't wait for chapter 11!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I'm really hoping you continue this series and put out more chapters more quickly. Your storytelling and characters have improved VASTLY. The Mischievous and Wolfe are fantastic. I found myself really enjoying and looking forward to the chapters involving them, far moreso than any of the others. The plot and past characters are revealing themselves more now, which is also causing impatience with your writing pace. Anyway, good job, and keep it up.

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