All Comments on 'Lost in the Wind Ch. 01'

A Wonderful beginning. Enjoy writing it and we WILL enjoy reading it.

You know I am reading and absolutely loving it! I think over the course of the Finding Home stories I've fallen in love with Nathan and it's going to be a treat to delve into his and Cassy's past and see how they began!!!

Not about a couple of poor pathetic wimps

why people have to destroy what they arent capable of understanding? Or u become a too good and appreciate writer and some inferior beings feel endangered by this? I'm sorry ...i know i should comment the story and not a stupid previous comment but it annoyed me. I like how u started this story and i'm very curious about it...from the other story i got the impression their relation was kinda cold and a bit cruel...i cant w8 to see the motives behind the sink test and the imposed silence...

Lass I am glad you did this prequel it will be good to learn more about the characters from Finding Home. we really should keep the poor wee trolls on a lead wie a wee tag attatched to their collar we could add some bells and pretty ribbons so folk could havce a good laugh. Your quality of writing is technically high, only spotted one and that was a missing letter(Shoves Granny Pedant back into her box "Shut up granny thons the pot cryin the kettle clarty") You are a very tallented wordsmith and an asset to the site.

I think this may turn out to be even better than "Finding Home", which I loved.

To the person who thought the characters were wimps: If you don't like it, don't read it.

Personally, I find it takes a lot more strength to live through weakness than to run roughshod over each other, ignoring thoughts and emotions and revelling only in the body.

Back to Xantu: I can't wait to read more. Ignore the ignorant. Brava!

I enjoyed it.

I am so hooked on this series and the characters. Cant wait for more.

This is a great story... are you going to do more with it?

i think this story will be right up my alley!i love this male,so physically different,yet definitedly an alpha. yummy.i too enjoyed the series that cassy has read. i can't wait to see where this story leads me. as always i so enjoy reading your tales.you have a huge talent.thanks for sharing with us all.annay

I feel so connected to this story already... perhaps because I see so much of myself in her. I love it, pulled me in right from the beginning.

I'm hooked. Like the slow development of the characters. Also like the long chapter. More, please.