All Comments on 'Lost Kingdoms Ch. 02'

Really liking it so far. Well done!!

It's great! I really like the amout of thought you've devoted into this instead of making it "another version of". I think it's refreshing that you've managed to capture this from another characters perception and not the only that, you've caught it from a females viewpoint as well

I'm definitely intrested now

Hey, was about to start reading your story but got sidetracked when I saw your comment. There was a series I used to really like with those themes, Shadow of the Minotaur is the first one if you're interested ^.^

Anyways I'll go back to reading your story now haha

Well written,

intriguing story and setup, I can't wait to see where this is going!

(And about that 'wrong feeling').

Keep them coming, please!