All Comments on 'Lost Kingdoms'

I'm wagering that you drew inspiration from SAO?

liking it so far. now we need more on it. and you mite want to let us know where all these people r coming from.

I like the world, I like the setting. This is an introductory page and it shows. Let's see what happens next. :)

Oh and to Anon that made the dubiously intended SAO statement, masked as a question. This doesn't sound like SAO at all. Perhaps Legendary Moonlight Sculptor, 1/2 Prince, or .hack. There are a bunch of others too, but those three come to mind. I like the venue.

I really enjoyed this chapter if you play it right you could easily be a top contender on lit. Your story seems that intresting, not only because of the setting, although that is a focal point but because your characters seems to be the tried and true rpg stlye characters that we all love.

Good luck

P.s and definitely seems more SAO than lms I've read them both and it seems to lean in that direction

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Great setup. Intrigued.