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by MorgaineLaFay

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TheJestersAdvocateTheJestersAdvocatealmost 16 years ago
Well done

First let's get the negative out of the way, the only problem I saw with this story was some punctuation/grammar/spelling....but hell no one or hardly anyone here is a pro.

Besides that though, this was an expectionally done story....not smutty at all but very erotic and sensuous. I must say I was feeling quite frisky after reading this.

Please keep up the wonderful work.

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I am the rain on a stormy night. I am the howling of the wind that calls out. I am the bolts of lightening that dances across your sky. I am the rage inside the sea. I am the wind that whips along dark beaches and whispers to you at night. I am the salt on your skin.