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All Comments on 'Lost Soulmate????'

by NW_Kevin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
yes, but....

nice idea, good story, poor grammar, bad spelling. get a good editor for the next one and it'll rock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Huh?

Well, he might have known but the reader had no clue. What kind of ending was this? You didn't even answer your own title question.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

WTF, what kind of story just stops with no real ending. Waste of time.

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