All Comments on 'Lost Strangers Ch. 01'

Been there! Great writing! Your story reminded me of the day when I fucked my ex sister-in-law and I nearly got caught in the bathroom with my jeans down around my ankles and boy did you turn me on. I had to have a pit stop halfway through! Look forward to the second part. Tom

...you reference "high school" three times, which is a bit much for one chapter. It didn't detract from the awesome pleasure that this story is undoubtedly going to turn into, but it was a little awkward!

Anyway, loved it. Please write more!!

... if told right with a good storyline. However one piece of advice is - Use an editor before you publish more parts of the story, I could notice a lot of grammatical mistakes.