All Comments on 'Louisiana Days Ch. 03'

Glad to see you continue writing this series, it's neat. Kinda hoping Jack hooks up with Doris from chapter 1 again, they had the best chemistry. Or maybe Jack could meet another older, seductive woman. That would be cool, too.

Ditto Anonymous. I, too, am happy he continued.

I loved the added touches of humor, and especially enjoyed the ending. 5*