All Comments on 'Love and Trust Betrayed Ch. 01'

Well done. I thought that she was going to stab him in the bed, or maybe because of the experience with her father...hang herself. It's perfect as is. Im sure others would like you to continue, but as it is it's a great food for thought piece.

A surprise? UGH!

for effort an content and to say fuck you asshole of LIT dear annony!!

With a couple throat splitting. Genre aside, you've made this cunt one of the more outright psychotic and evil pieces of male trash in the category. I half expect this shit to lead to bleeding, broken bones and him getting civilised by her daddy in what appears to be an ongoing story.

As it is, it would have been fine ending with the words Bruce was gone.

How does this non erotic snooze feat have such a high rating? I'm thinking the author has a program giving himself false ratings. I mean seriously, a story about a guy sexually abusing a already damaged woman is erotic? Common!

5star for the honest feelings of a selfish guy in love

i love this story so rare to find a guy longing begging for forgiveness to the one woman who loved him with her heart but he cheated so many times on that sweet naive girl

what a selfish liar bastard he is

he makes all women go down on him but he himself never went down on any woman not even sweet little poor bryce

5stars loved it beautiful

i am surprised by the hate spewing stupid bitchy anomymous commenters

i loved this story every fucking min this was so better so real than the misogynistic trash lit suggest