All Comments on 'Love at First Sight'

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TiggerTooTiggerTooover 18 years ago
Very Nicely Done

Two people finding each other and knowing it immediately.

Pleasureable sex that shows each other caring and respect.

Thanks.

Phil

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a nice gentle erotic romance

Very well written and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.

fickfroschfickfroschover 18 years ago
Pleasant Story

I like your first story !

Go ahead.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Very well done...

Though a trifle too fast-paced.

That's Ok for a 1st story though!

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Outstanding!

No wasted words in this short but full story! A wonderfully happy blend of romance and sex,with the "love at first sight" theme continually lifting the story to a magical place.

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Was a Married guy now separated that loves sexy erotic stories...many many fantasies....would love to make some come true

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