All Comments on 'Love at Last Ch. 01-02'

Love it

Can't wait for the next chapter

LOVED IT! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

i hope viktor doesnt do something stupid

"Michelle said, cheesing"

What the hell is cheesing?

Wen's d nxt chapter cmng?? Dis story's jst amazing

Great story. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Very good start. i hope to read more soon.

Your story line is there and your character introduction is ok too. I like it so far. I'm just glad I'm not the only Arab (Palestinian) that is into erotica stories and to top it nonhuman category. Keep up the work. Literature is literature in any format or concept. It's the authors world to be free and indulge.

Wow! Thank you guys for all the wonderful feedback! I'm so happy that you all enjoyed the first submission to this story! I'm smiling from ear to ear right now! I've submitted the rest of the chapters that I have worked on...so hopefully it will be up in a few days! I look forward to hearing more of wonderful feedback! Stay tuned, it only gets better form here!

Thanks,

Arabic_Beauty22

First of all, I would like to thank the readers for taking the time out to read my story. I'm so happy to hear all of the wonderful feedback you guys have posted. I've submitted the next several chapters, so hopefully it will be up in a few days! I can't wait!!!! Please send me more feedback. It's greatly appreciated and considered. Thanks again to RexBrookdale for editing my story! I couldn't have had a better editor. Also, to the Anonymous person who asked what is cheesing? It is another term for smiling from ear to ear! :)