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- Love, Be-Were! Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Love, Be-Were! Ch. 02'
by Mistress_of_Shadows
- 31 Comments
Honouralmost 11 years agoThis is shaping up to be one of the better stories on this site. It is interesting to see a writer who can come to a genre with fresh eyes.
Well done keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoWow I got so wrapped up in the I jumped when someone spoke to me. Please keep writing as this is shaping up to be a wonderful series
Nightowl19
angel_n_disguisealmost 11 years agoI read this chapter. Twice. And both times I could not suppress the tears from welling up in my eyes-and flowing down my cheeks-unabashed. My heart actually aches a bit from the raw emotion that you have infused into this beautiful were rabbit tale. The story is enthralling, every word drawing me deeper into the saga, my mind whirling with anticipation as the story continues to unfold! I am rivited-waiting for more!
cantfightfatealmost 11 years agoI wish you would update more frequently.
JazCullenalmost 11 years agoWow, the emotion in this chapter brought tears to my eyes. You could feel that little boy's pain as if it were a tangible thing. I am loving the clean, concise way you write and how you draw the reader in. Excellent work :)
boneamsalmost 11 years agoTop-notch job Mistress. In my humble opinion, I don’t feel as if you lure the emotions of your readers with your words, as much as rip it out of our hearts and throw it on the keyboard. I’m a guy with a past and it’s hard for me to FEEL emotion in a story. You had them streaming down my face, and screaming at the monitor, “Damn it! Someone help this kid!” You have a TALENT that hooks your readers in from the start, and leaves them breathless at the end. It would not surprise me in the least to see some trophies next to your name in the near future. Well done, Mistress, well done.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agothe alpha change to hybrid form seemed to have a very long description;almost made me skip a few words, maybe cos we already had his full change from ch1 or maybe i'm just used to were worlds. that said, Fabulous work Milady.
very arresting in detail and most fascinating.
indeed, pls keep the updates coming even quicker.
Masterof_theShadowsalmost 11 years agoGreat read... there are points within the story that had me so wrapped up in the Alpha role that it had myself feeling like I needed to run out and take someone/something out to protect a child... /taps fingers on desk waiting for more
cinder_bluealmost 11 years agodid rye's father drop him off near the orphanage then? perhaps knowing he'd go rogue/feral soon after? very original story...intriguing.
that last part with his mama holding onto him was just amazing.
nicintasalmost 11 years agoWhat a tear jerker! I was weeping as the Mother fought and held on to save her boy!
Jeepers that sucked, but I love it too ;o)
Excellent story. You are very talented !!!!
Can't wait for more!
Nicole
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoBeautiful and so heart wrenching. The love of a mother, the anguish of a husband and father too late to save his family. I could hardly read it through the tears in my eyes. And the poor traumatized child! The love of Nyrra and Rhochlan will heal him, I have no doubt. Please though, I beg you, don't let Rye's father have just ditched him, or blamed him for the death of his mother. I seriously don't think my heart could take it. And for the sake of all of our mental and emotional health, please above all, post again soon! Thank you for this. So much more than an amusing Were story about rabbits. Brava!
MSBLING59almost 11 years agoSO MANY EMOTIONS IN SO LITTLE WORDS. A DAMN GOOD STORY. IF I READING THIS ON PAPER IT WOULD BE SOAKING WET FROM MY TEARS. I GAVE UP WORKING WITH KIDS AS A NURSE CAUSE IT PULLED ON MY HEART STRINGS. IT HURTS SO MUCH WHEN YOU CAN'T HELP THEM AND YOU'VE DONE ALL YOU COULD DO AND MORE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. LOVED IT
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI just love this story so much, and I will say this, "silence, speaks a thousand words". That was just heart retching to read, I was crying so.
elspethsheynaalmost 11 years agoI love the new spin on the traditional shapeshifter story. its well written and i can't wait to be able to read more.
HyacinthBluealmost 11 years agoThis is so unbelievably awesome and original! I keep giggling at the rabbits. Such a neat change from the usual wolves and panthers. Also, love the magnetism between the two, very hot. Yum.
FA_JFalmost 11 years agoI am crying and twitching and squeeing and rolling nekked on this story. I think I've only done all that for one other story.
Your description of Rye's were-rabbit was soul wrenching.
Iread2relaxalmost 11 years agoThis chapter was so good that I don't even have the words to describe how good. Five stars are not enough. Next chapter please.
Serenity_R0sealmost 11 years agoonce you are done with this, I would like a signed copy of the book!!! Please continue this story, for I would love to see what happens to Nyrra, Rhoch and Rye. This is so much more than just an erotic story... This is a world one can fall into and hope to never come out of.
Wonderful job Mistress.
FA_JFalmost 11 years agoWe want more hot, smoldering bunny!
(Pretty please)
FA_JFalmost 11 years ago*sits on floor rocking and muttering*
"bunny...bunny...bunny....bunny...bunny...bunny...
bunny...bunny...bunny...bunny...bunny.................."
redirish77over 10 years agoNeed.MORE.BUNNYZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE it!!!!
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