by LipstickSmudges
A little rushed but I like the story. What about her tits and how big was his cock?
Thank you for reading. I’ll explore describing their bodies more elaborately in the next chapter.
This is great! The story went faster than I expected it to but it was delicious. Would love elaborate descriptions of the fucking.
Thank you for reading. Will do! Chapter two will be even better.
Accidentally hit one star! So sorry I don't know how to change it! It was good, I'm so sorry about the rating!
Thank you for reading, It’s okay. Mistakes happen. Hope you like the second chapter once I release it.
Like the story but a bit rushed and def needs an editor as there are quite a few wrong words in it
Thank you for reading! an editor would be lovely, especially since I don't like reading my own work :)
The forum has a place you can find those. I equally dislike rereading myself so i do get it.