All Comments on 'Love Behind Bars'

by LipstickSmudges

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cowbullscowbullsalmost 6 years ago

A little rushed but I like the story. What about her tits and how big was his cock?

LipstickSmudgesLipstickSmudgesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to Cowbulls

Thank you for reading. I’ll explore describing their bodies more elaborately in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Damn

This is great! The story went faster than I expected it to but it was delicious. Would love elaborate descriptions of the fucking.

LipstickSmudgesLipstickSmudgesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to anonymous

Thank you for reading. Will do! Chapter two will be even better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So sorry!

Accidentally hit one star! So sorry I don't know how to change it! It was good, I'm so sorry about the rating!

LipstickSmudgesLipstickSmudgesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to anonymous

Thank you for reading, It’s okay. Mistakes happen. Hope you like the second chapter once I release it.

GaminaGaminaalmost 6 years ago
Good not great

Like the story but a bit rushed and def needs an editor as there are quite a few wrong words in it

LipstickSmudgesLipstickSmudgesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to Gamina

Thank you for reading! an editor would be lovely, especially since I don't like reading my own work :)

GaminaGaminaalmost 6 years ago
Editors

The forum has a place you can find those. I equally dislike rereading myself so i do get it.

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