All Comments on 'Love Comes When You Least Expect It Ch. 01'

I know there has to be more to this. /Can't wait for the second verse. Great writing.

Nicely done with the editing, and especially the realness of the romp for the characters! As enjoyable to read the second time. Good job, and looking forward again to part 2!

I think you did a fantastic job. I was very into it,plesse continue

Nice! Really good job, looking foraward for 2nd part :)