All Comments on 'Love Conquers All Pt. 02'

Your poem 'His Name Be Praised' served as an inspiration for this story.

This story could've easily turned into a novel, unfortunately I lack the kind of focus and commitment it would require. This was a compromised version... maybe someday I'll be able to write this story exactly the way I saw it unfold in my head.

http://www.literotica.com/p/his-name-be-praised

I liked the sense of completion. Also, it always sounds better in latin.

I loved this story

It was simple and sweet

It flowed wonderfully and had the right amount of plot twist

And romance to make me happy xx

Thank you for reading my story and voting (it's petty I know, but watching the scores made me happy). As someone who writes in secret and anonymously it is very encouraging to read the comments here as well as the feedback mails I've received. So, thank you.

If there is one thing that can make a story horrible or amazing its the ending. It's sad that she will not remember her love of him from before but him and his daughter living with her is a great way to end things.

Once you go Rakshasa, you never go back.

The size was a bit daunting ( of the story, not the demon's cock ) for us poets with short attention spans, but you done a fine job. It held true to the category. No distractions. Definately original.

I'm glad my poem inspired something more than bloating and nausea.

@ Magnetron- You thought this was daunting? I scaled back. There was so much I saw and I got an idea for the sequel too. I have a name plot everything lined up. I just need to be able to focus and pen it down.

Anyway, thanks for the inspiration. Who knew a parody thread could lead to all this?

this was really a beautiful story

I would like to read iT in noval size

You used indian words

Like jawala

Dai is not name iT simply is midwife

And nakhushi na meaning not and khushi is happiness

But you could call her dukhi that means what the life was For nakhushi

Rakshah means demon

Nice work

this story is just superb

You got talent girl and i wish their where more people who would have comment

I love ur story

Ps i am also indian