by MSTarot
I'm so impressed with the scope of the history here. I love how you take your character from his youth to his deathbed, always focused on this intriguing woman.
The fact that he was so overwhelmed by the subject of his research is something that I actually got a little jealous of. I've always enjoyed doing research but wish I could have found such a fascinating topic when I was in college!
Incorporating his dreams was a touch close to my heart.
like I do many of your stories...but is this a re-write I could swear that I have read this before...
Touching without being saccharine - well done.
Without being or implying anything snobbish, I have never heard someone who was in a fraternity call it a "frat" -
Not a re-write. I wrote this about a year back and have been going back to it to try and self edit it. I finally decided to just post it and go work on something else
This was an outstanding read. I always hope for longer stories, but you seem to always pull off the short ones so well. I still want longer ones from you, but if they're all this good, I'll settle for any length.
What a beautiful, passionate, moving story of love. You touched my heart. Thank you.
two theaters which were on the train route used by the vaudeville shows in the day. Both beautifully restored. One and active small town performing arts theater and one more often used for movies and the Met and similar performances shown on the screen.
In my youth, I saw Blaze and some of her contemporaries in Baltimore. You captured the atmosphere of the shows very well, and their limits.