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Anonymousover 19 years agoVery weak story.
No buildup, no characterization. Things happen for the sake of happening. Pretty empty.
Anonymousover 19 years agopretty good
Pretty good for a first story. Not overly involved detail wise but provided a reasonable background (not, so I met her and we fucked). Missing words and misspellings distracting.
Anonymousover 19 years agoReads like a first draft.
Competely lacking in substance. The story just lays there.
Anonymousover 7 years agoboring
It was such poo er boring and I just skimmed through it after I read the first paragraph because it didn't even catch my attention. NOT EVEN THE SEX SCENE
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