by Turbidus
Very nice story. Maybe "nice" isn't the right word but can't think of a better one. Brings emotion and fear. If your goal is to make the reader feel and think you definitely succeeded. A 5 from me. Thank you.
It just makes me wonder whose grief are you extrapolating your own or someone else. If it was your own then it is too shallow. If it was someone else's it was a too deep. Again Grief means and reflects differently in different people and this is my assessment Don't take it to heart!!
Being in treatment for one cancer after another, 3 to date, for the past three years,,, I understand the pain, the uncertainty, the lack of emotion, and the joy at a brief ray of sunshine coming along. Any deeper than where you went is not needed and would not be understood by most folks anyway.
Thank. An enjoyable tale.
Best always,
bluemtnsman
thanks for the comment and I hope all is well with you
A sad story but wow that was amazing yeah you made need an editor but who doesn't that story really made me feel for the characters and I'm happy with the ending just a happy ending in all the drama. And she became a mom that just wowed me the things to do when you feel loved. Great story 5 stars.
Unbelievably good ! You are an exceptionally gifted writer. The emotion that you created was real as were the tears. I hesitated before reading this one but I’m glad I did. The characters came to life. We knew whose they were. Their description was just right. Two beautiful human beings extending life, as it should be. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s, more if I could ❤️