All Comments on 'Love in the Air'

Title of my comment says it all. Well done!

It's like reading a book that has pages torn out of the middle. Nice story til then though.

There are a lot of holes and it felt rushed.

Poor

It did feel a bit rushed, but was quite enjoyable just the same.

Just skipped randomly ahead... Even adding "epilogue" would have made the ending better... Nice story overall, though

Nice story.