by bradley_stoke
This was a moving write. Thank you so much for it. I have mentioned it on the "New Story Review Thread" found on the Author Forum of Lit's bulletin board. Thank you ~ Red
I enjoy reading about fictional but realistic people who have persisted in overcoming life's adversities to their great benefit. Could I be that strong?
We have a deaf man where I work and we all make an effort to include him in our socializing. He is the nicest person and we're great buds.
Thanks.
Phil
It is not often that I read a story where the essence of true love is demonstrated. The closing lines of this story indicate exactly that. This is good writing.
anyone who does not shy away from the human nature to refer to having a crap in the morning (without making a fetish of it) has got to be commended
I really enjoyed this... it's a unique perspective to take, and what I really enjoyed about it is how you kept up the little details about the perspective: the steps she took for example, the feelings rather than the sights. It's a great read. Well done!
For a romance it lacked one or two pages. The beginning gives a great promise that leave us wanting...