by ashadow_beneath
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I could feel like every word you said as if it was me and my boyfriend the detail OMG the detail passion in its finest hour is by far the best. I love ya girl for doing this youve expressed all the emotions ive sought so hard to try and put to words.. thankyou just omg thankyou
I sat here tonight with the intentions of winding(spelling) down so i could go to bed. but when i was given the link to your story i desided to go read it and now i sit here more horny than i've ever been in my whole life. it's almost like i was really there and that i was the one telling the story. boy oh boy do i wish i could encounter something that great in my life time. Love it so much yet it makes you cry!!
You have a true talent for bringing the reader into the experience with you.. I was there, lusting, bleeding, breathing hard right along with you both. Awesome work!