All Comments on 'Love Knows No Color Pt. 10'

by bwwm4me

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Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2over 7 years ago
Good Stuff

Interesting. Finally peace for Jason & Shavonda. Sounds like Shavonda has a "bun in the oven". Good things to those who wait....

Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2over 7 years ago
What a chapter!!!

And good shall prevail. Look like Shavona has a bun or 2 in oven. Can't wait for finally...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
schizophrenic !

schizophrenic !

love knows no colour and then post it under Interracial Love ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Be Pregnant!

Great chapter. I agreed with the mommas. I'm so glad they confronted them and made them fix the window, buy a better phone, etc. But I'm glad Rose is scared.

Sounds like Von got the symptoms of someone who's pregnant. 😋😜😂 Hope so!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Sorry, you almost turned me off with the last chapter, but this statement, "A black man against a cop?" finished me off.

BarnengBarnengover 7 years ago
Great Job

Nice series. The story line is better than the sex and the sex isn't bad. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic!

I'm not even usually a fan of long multichapter stories, but I'm really enjoying this one. I, too, am hoping for a miracle baby. :)

(on an unrelated random side note, the security code is 56DD. LOL)

bwwm4mebwwm4meover 7 years agoAuthor
Author's notes.

Thanks to all who have read this far.

@buxom

the previous part was rather raw, but yes, their actions, extreme as they were, have finally brought them peace.

@ everybody Re: baby

Jason's mother certainly thinks Von has one in the oven, We'll have to see where this heads. All I know was that seeing my sons live birth was one of the most beautiful things I've ever experienced. Jason missed out on that experience. It would be great if they got a chance to share that.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 7 years ago
Love this story

So much going for it. Authentic story, situations, confrontations and reconciliations. :)

DwarfLord50DwarfLord5011 months ago

Damn! That scene with the recipes actually had me in tears. Beautifully done!

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