All Comments on 'Love Knows No Color Pt. 20'

by bwwm4me

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I have read every chapter of this story, it really is beautiful how you describe the love you two have for each other. My grandmother couldn't accept my mothers marriage either, it caused a lot of problems in the beginning, but later she accepted it a lot better. I know of the problems you face from observing but also by personal experience. I can only imagine how hard this was to write, its worth five stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

There are two stories that should be put into publication either by book, or with a little work would do well as a movie. Yours is one, the entire story is beautiful, realistic, and at times gritty, which makes it even more special, many people can relate to this. This is truly beautiful. One should only hope to find the love you two have

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I was browsing through your favorite stories, because I like your style of writing and am interested in reading other interracial stories, and I didn't see one that I am sure you would enjoy; check out Ryan. I caught this one about two months before I caught yours. Both are the very best and have similar situation only happening in different states, I think they both start in the spring as well

bwwm4mebwwm4mealmost 7 years agoAuthor
Authors Notes

@walk86

You are correct that this latest part was difficult for me to write. In doing so, I dredged up some long buried feelings. Neither my grandmother nor my grandfather ever got to meet my queen before they passed. And in writing this, I realized how much I missed them. Grandma died in 2000, and he followed a year later. Both were not cool with my relationship, though Grandpap told my mother just before he died that he had nothing against my queen. When she told me, I wished i'd have had the courage to take her to meet him.

Ironically, my aunt, who appears in these stories as Nora, has met my queen and they get along just fine.

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