All Comments on 'Love Like a Blue Shell Pt. 03'

Great work as always, but personally I liked the first one more. Maybe because of Sydney’s chemistry with Tim and her desire to please him... submissively almost. I would love to see a lot more of that interaction in the next one. That said, still a great read and appreciated the longer chapter!

This series keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!

Gave it 5 stars. Loved the Tim/Zoe scene. Can't wait for #4.

More PLEASE!

Waiting for courtney-Tim together. Kind of hot!

You have a wonderful way of building the sexual tension between the characters, and I love the way you portray their thoughts and feelings. Everyone is looking at the same events, but reacting in different ways.

One ofthe best stories i have read here in a while.bc75

All 4 parts are great, characters are brilliant and the entire thing builds so well.

Shame there’s no part 5 though.

A little bit hard to follow the game since I haven't ever played but still a good story.

No pregnancies though please.

Warhols? Is that a riff on Courtney Taylor Taylor in the opening paragraph? And Zia is kinda close to Zoe. Full music nerding aside, the writing and storyline is fresh and just a pleasure to read. Thanks, and please keep the stories coming!

And Taylor has got to be the worst girlfriend in the world. She keeps talking about making things even and every time she does more than Tim.

I thought games would end at least by now, no the stupid characters play games to what they already did! Why dont you just write about hames and not erotica?