by The_Dork_Knight
Otherwise, you show a wide range for a writer and would encourage you to continue and expand your characters.
that anyone could be quite so dense as our hero in this story, to put up with the treatment that Jessica doled out to him.
The character is a classic 'user' — completely attuned to her own needs, her desires; completely self-focused. (Although I have my doubts about that: she could have hardly helped noticing that she had a slave running around to do her bidding! Probably the object of scorn and laughter the entire time.)
And at the end, she showed neither sympathy nor empathy for the poor sucker. Alas, he was finally going to make HIS feeling known, and that didn't fit into his role. Banished. Said the Red Queen, 'off with his head!'
His problem with finding a new object of worship? No one else was enough of a user/abuser for him. lol.
Ain't it a bitch?!
I have a bit of history which is vaguely similar. But sooner or later, reality whacks you on the head with a 2x4, and you wonder why you didn't get smarter, much sooner.
This was a catalog of bummer scenarios, and basically, so fucking what?
and shud have fucked her when she asked, he took risk of not fucking her, and i did not see any wrong in that - she was single not in relation at that time, he was single, so no cheating, she was asking, so no rape, he was sucker, feeling always die once beded with bitch.At least he would know how good she was in bed, then he would only lust over her not fellin like lost puppy. but i want to suggest the name of story
"Lost Puppy"
wt you think.
but an idiot who loves a shallow person should be pitied. TK U MLJ LV NV
She was a lousy friend. All she thought about was herself. He was too introverted. He should have revealed his true feelings long before he did. He could have had a good life. What a shame. Glad it was fiction.
So he was always there to lend a shoulder to cry on, but when he's the one who's hurting, she disappears faster than Houdini ever did on stage? She's clearly too selfish. If she doesn't love him, that's fine. But she should've at least comforted him and let him down easy. But no, bitch option it is.
What a disappointing story. Not because she basically shit on him when he told her how he felt about her. But because he lowered himself to be her lackey, her gofer, her personal servant, throwing away any pride or dignity he may have had. But he never got up the nerve to tell her he loved her. He wasted years on a woman who just used him. A woman who didn’t deserve him. I sympathize with him because I was “him” many years ago. But my pride wouldn’t allow me to let her keep jerking me around so I just left her. Just like that wimp should have done.
Wishing and hoping for that "magical moment" that never came. Guess what, have to make it happen. Women, is like a city bus. If she's not going your way. Be another one in twenty minutes.
Been there, done that. Got the scars, at least mental ones, to prove it. But I will say I cut my losses and moved on a hell of a lot quicker than this guy did. This was a pretty good story, and well written. It’s just too bad it took the guy so long to figure out what a self-serving bitch Jessica really was.
Pointless story, not worth the 30 seconds to read it. Just fucking tell her or get a damn clue.