All Comments on 'Love Note Pt. 01'

Five.

A beautifully written story told in my own backyard!

Loved it.

I would give you 50 stars if I could.

each day for year - just for starters...wish I could...*sigh*

Fabulous. It is 3 am, and I stayed awake to finish reading this beautifully written story. Can't wait to read more. I'd give more than 5* if I could!

Passion is a dead art. You brought it back. A true 5

On this site and us lowly peasants because this should be a published work. I was sucked in from the beginning, and I couldn't stop until I was finished. I was compelled to complete this, and I sincerely hope that you'll grace us with more of this wonderful tale. Because, whoa!

This is what I have been waiting for !!!! Please update soon...

This is how it's done! I love Leo and Anais! The buildup of their story was perfect and the climax deliciously satifying. Please continue their story. 💖

...mesmerizing and seductive throughout. That's all I can say. An overwhelming 5!

I can't wait to read more!

OMG I'm totally floored at how amazing this is .this is truly amazing work . The depth you put into each character is breath taking *bravo*

NOTHING BEATS this!!! Poignantly captivating! Beautifully written!!

I'm absolutely undone!! N I WANT A LEO!!!

*STANDING OVATION!!

I'm falling in love with this story. Everything is so real.So beautiful I can imagine it if I closed my eyes. Truly captivating. I can't wait for more.

Lush, poignant, and meltingly romantic. I'm at a loss for words. I shed tears when Leo asked that she stay with him. I'm all out in left field. I'm twisted up in the game. God help me, I'm hooked. Thank you and please know that I'm a devoted fan henceforth. 5*****.

Sensuous, vibrant, evocative, sexy!!! Your stories always leave this sexy intellectual yearning for more. I beg you to find a publisher. Your stories are so well developed,

so well written. I love the wonderful bits of South Africa you give us. I am ready to book my flight and find a bookstore in Johannesburg for some "Coffee and Poetry" or perhaps to rediscover Anais

Bravo!!! Another 5 stars!!!

What a great story! I love the characters and the smooth flow of the story. Five stars from me. Keep writing, please.

So real and raw, without ever being vulgar or tasteless. I love how you take the reader on a roller coaster ride from mellow, sensuous and smoldering.... to white hot intensity. Totally lost myself in this story. Very skilled writing, I loved it. Thank you!

This was a ridiculously well written, sensual, realistic, honest and beautiful story. Took me back to when I first discovered this site and had all those truly fantastic classics in the hall of fame to read. Your story took me by surprise and left me feeling all kinds of emotional. Thank you so much for sharing this!!!! WOW!😘

Please, can we have the 2nd part already... I've been checking daily since you posted. Please post soon.

All your work, especially this one really just....wow....captured my complete attention. Please continue to bless us with the gift of your writing. If you should EVER decide to write paperback or hardcover books, I would buy it in a heartbeat. Just let us know on your biography page. Until then, I will keep looking out for ANY new work from you.

I don't really know what to say... I came across this randomly never read any of your work now instant fan. Thunderous Round of Applause

Please publish a book. I love your stories and the South African context. Proudly black South African. Can we please have more submissions or chapters to the stories already written too. I'm an instant fan

Holy shit! This is ahhhhmazing! Your grasp of the written word is superbly flawless. I am just flabberasted at what I have just read...please tell me there's more to come, because this is brilliant!

This story is amazing, I love how the words just flow. From the first sentence in your story it immediately attracted my attention. I also love your story "coffee and poetry". I Can't wait for what that wonderful mind of your's will come up with next.

That was beautiful. It's rare to come across a story of this caliber on an erotica site. These characters had such depth built into them in such a short span already. Such a bittersweet feel. That ache to the heart of shared understanding with her and what she feels, and the delicate hope for her. Please write more, and publish professionally.

I have been looking for a South African based story since forever and when I found it,I certainly was not disappointed.Please continue.Cannot believe this happened in my own backyard!

I enjoyed this so much. I'd like to add more words and maybe sing a fucking poem about how awesome and wet it got me but I'll keep it simple for once. This rocked.

You are truly a gifted writer. It read like published sexy romance novel, not a typical erotic short storey.

...just spent my afternoon lost in Coffee & Poetry and Love Note...a beautiful erotica journey....I was Ella ...I was Anais...I didn't want to end.

Hoping your schedule allows you to gift us with more of Ella's and Anais' stories soon.

Im so in love with this you have no idea I went to bed reading this

Woke up the next morning thinking about this and had to finish it and Im in love can I have Leo PLEASE!!

What a gift you have for parsing the emotional cadence that builds to intense moments!

I was easily drawn in by your prose and the promise of intimacy held by Anais and Leo with little more than furtive glances, but their intense union at the end was a crescendo that delivered on that promise.

Thank you for sharing your gift. I look forward to reading any and everything you share.

Truly amazing.

Please finish their story! It's so beautifully written!

This is one of the best I've read. Please update & wrote more.

Oh they are so beautiful. This story is perfect. I hope you'll be able to continue, because it cannot end here! Please update soon.

Beautifully written! You have a way with words that weave magic inside your readers! Would love to read more from you....

Great story! I love the fleshed-out characters and plot. It's so nice to see a story where a black person is portrayed as a multifaceted, intelligent person. I also like the development of a real romance. I'd love to see more stories in this vein.

Please finish their story! This desperately needs another chapter

someone please finish this story or tell me where i can find it completed

hey, complete the story !!

This is the best LIT story I've read so far!!!!

fuck! this story is goooood! Can't wait to get into the 2nd part!

Thank you for this gift of a story.

One of the BEST stories I have ever read! You remind me of Freegirl...you both have that ability to draw the reader in so well you can see the characters. I can not wait to read more...Keep up the good work!

This was the thunder ... part 2 will be the lightning. Great writing !

Damn. That ballade and the flock of bird/notes tattoos ... bravo!