All Comments on 'Love of Politics Ch. 06'

The narrative and dialogue in your stories continues to shine. You have also done a good job of portraying Beths cavalier attitude towards her affair without turning her into a caricature of a cheating wife. This genre is full of stories populated with what can best be described as cartoon characters that act and think along predictable lines. You have taken a unique slant on this type of story and used your very real skills to write something original.

So this is your theme so far. Cuckolding repetitiously and sickly without a concern, respect or consequence the braindead pitiful male. In this consistant process, you discredit yourself, your talent and your work.

Why do you consistantly demean males? You have talent but not in an erotic sense -just the tired depressing frustrating consistant violation of spousal agreement for cutish selfish reasons. What promotes this non-remarkable consistancy? Surely there is something else other than lessons for an all powerful non-conscionable woman on how to demean her weak but loving husband? Isn't there?

Due to your talent, we selfishly hope that you will give variation some thought.

They are way to friednly. While the SOB politican is screwing his manager her husband is giving it to the politican's wife. And I bey before it's over both marriages will be dog shit! I like the story and hope the husband isn't a wimp when he finds out! Political people are the most evil of our country make him burn Jacquioh2

why she doesn't just stay with Mark. She clearly loves him more and clearly enjoys sex with him more.

Cobgratulations on some fine erotic writing. Initially you portrayed Beth as an attractive loving wife who, in a weak woment, had a fling with Mark that resulted in a real guilt trip for her when she got home and saw husband David who came across as kind of a role playing wimp.Now Beth has evolved into an amoral, unfaitful wife who has sex with Mark without a trace of guilt. The two of them appear to be equally unfaithful, and watch David and "Phyl" playing with the kids in a condescending way. Now David and "Phyl" appear to be"the good ones" . I assume David is going to wise up and find Beth's cum filled green panties in her case and raise hell. Still good suspense Though. Will David and Phyl hook up and Divorce the unfaithful ones or do you have another suprise in store for us ? Looking forward to your next chapter. 60 year old George

it's so freakin' sexy!, that Marky Senator, god the way he finds way to pummel me in his various offices! gosh!

My nice hubby DAvid loves me to death, too. Gosh, two guys constatnly fuck me silly! Lucky me! lol

and for that it gets a 100. But it really scares me that there are fucked up people like this rearing fucked up kids (who may have to interat my my kids) and thinking they should be tolerated when they should be taken off to a deserted island and left to fend for themselves. YUCK!

What a wonderful sensuous description of a loving fuck. Rather than showing Beth as cavalier about cheating, jacqui draws a real woman capable of loving more than one man. As in real life, things aren't so simple.

May most of the plants in the cheating witch's leafy blade be poison ivey.