All Comments on 'Love of the Motherland'

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zoofest43zoofest43almost 12 years ago

interesting concept ,i enjoyed the piece immensely.

dinkymacdinkymacalmost 12 years ago
Nice story!!

Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
superb

That pretty much covers it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow !

Hauntingly beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Well done. Interesting bit of legend dropped in there.

sithonsithonalmost 9 years ago
Very good

One of your better stand alone stories .

It would be a neat source of story ideas to mine various ethnic myths. Baba yaga, Hansel and Gretel, the ban sidhe, Brigadoon, El Dorado, and especially The Fountain Of Youth. All told with your erotic flair.

gollyathgollyathover 7 years ago

Well that was enjoyable. Something tells me this will stick with me... Although Im fantasizing about a LNH WWII short ;) Quite fun to read.

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