All Comments on 'Love Story'

A cheeky exercise in the cream rising to top and dregs settling slowly but inevitably to bottom.

Mine is to be offended when an author doesn't warn his readers that he is posting more Cuck Crap.

You wasted my time, I will add one star to compensate for it.

this writer has a great sense of humour, obviously written to stir up the annons and not to be taken seriously , well done

and he is satisfied.. TK U MLJ LV NV

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What's the appeal of being lied to and manipulated? What healthy person would accept this kind of abusive behaviour?

Love story? I don't think so...a sad and disgusting one, yes...The truth about this story was said in the beginning: "She was doing this because she wanted to, without caring about my feelings..."!!! He was right since they have met: She couldn't love him and she didn't ever...She only cared about her...The lover being a charitable person, helping people in Africa? I don't think so...maybe he used it as a cover to test dangerous drugs in there, or to drop there hazard and toxic waste...1*

No, really, fuck off.

No respect, no fidelity, no nothing, but your fucking disgusting and abominable mind making up shit, thinking that any man would accept anything of this sort.

Stop writing. It's simply awful.

I quite enjoyed this. Helped by good writing, and uncertainty as to whether the worm was going to turn or not. Part 2 perhaps? Can the worm turn?

You know this could have been a good story. Its well written, it had a plot, you threw in a twist. But all in all, its just the same old BS cuckold story. What is so special about turning husbands in to wimps? Are you telling us, that once you get married, men become emasculated and then they are seen as less than they were before. Stories like this one sure makes a person wonder about getting into relationships. Oh well, what a waste of talent.

gave you a 5!!!

No really, what is wrong with you? You keep telling us how much she loves him when the opposite is true. IF she loved him, she wouldn't have abandoned him for another man. IF she loved him, she wouldn't humiliate her husband. IF she loved him, she wouldn't castrate him, emotionally or mentally.

I understand falling out of love and loving someone else, why complicate it?

So the narrator gets a hard-on, and THAT equals approval for every outrageous action of his wife.

"I KNOW I don't want this, but my little stiffy says that I must, so anyway...."

Has anyone every heard of the phrase, "Don't let the little head do your thinking"??

Anyway, this is just as much of a tired hackneyed plot device as other favorites, like hubby has a small dick, but lover has 12 inches, or OF COURSE all white women just HAVE to have a BBC, and then somehow get brainwashed into a subservient role because becoming an instant gangbang whore is just SO.......well whatever.

The point is, I find it hard to accept that with the inner turmoil related by the narrator, that he manages to get a hard-on THAT often and THAT unconventionally, so that any basic logic is defied at any turn. But even more offensive is the idea that a hard-on means ANYTHING other than a mere rush of blood....

Like Britease said, this was well written in a technical perspective. But the absolute reliance on such a bad cliche to revolve the plot around was just silly.

Don't worry author, because I basically skimmed, I refrained from voting.

But I do hope something changes for this guy. And when it does, I hope it isn't his gender identity. I hope somebody in this story learns a lesson. But if the lesson continues to be "Don't think with your dick", then I would have to advise even those who enjoy cuck stories to skip it. Why settle for mediocre characters, doing trite things, with a plot that screams "could've seen that coming..."??? Why do that when your writing talent could obviously allow you to share something that makes for so much more of a compelling story??

Good luck!

When reading is not on her list of capabilities... There is no way to give a great score to a story about the lack of compassion a wife has for her husband who has never done anything to hurt her in any way. Her actions in this attempt to denegrate the male partner is simply cruel and very selfish.

She has no concern for anyone but herself. If this goes any farther without the husband becoming "The Terminator", then he turns in his man card and dies.

There was no love here...just a creampie eating wimp and a cheating cunt.

I bet you can so read, so read this asshole of LIT!! Fuck you in the heart I gave this a 5

Had to speed read to get to the end and will do you a favor and not rate the story at all because it was simply too far out there. On reflection there must be a mistake, the husband could not be having sex with his wife because he has no balls.

Puke

For its mix of seeming innocence and yet uncompromising libidinousness. Quite original -- never encountered anything like it. Ignore the kneejerking crowd and carry this to whatever conclusion you find emotionally yet practically logical. We're in country we've not explored before!

Women like this cause them, when she comes home and the husband shoots her, then goes over and shoots the asshole that messes with his wife.

sorry looked 1st page over went to last page laughed and said yep another looser storie.

Wimp fetish femdom shit.

Well written story about thoroughly despicable characters.

Boring cuck crap. Please stop writing.

Because there's no one to like in the story. She's such a miserable, self centered whore that no man in his right mind would have done anything else but throw her out and divorce her. And made sure that David was exposed as a philandering low life scumbag. Ruin his Charity with a simple press release. And David? What's to be said about a man with no pride or self respect? There was nothing erotic or entertaining about anyone's actions in this mess you call a story.

1 star for total bollucks.

There's more yet to come to this story. Thus far a 5 for conceivable credibility and the aspect of sincere, sustained innocence, a sense that loving is giving (to one or more, unfortunately). Ignore the reflexive BTB Moralists and finish this as you see fit. He joins his wife in loving her lover? He finds he can't sustain sharing her and demands she choose? He rejects her for infidelity? Greater love hath no man than to (sob) yield her to a more intellectually and socially fit companion than he is, despite her pleas? For centuries, a man could love a wife and a mistress if he could afford them both (standard behavior in France, after all). So why not, in these enlightened days, a woman desiring the same? Yours is the first I've seen to study the possibility closely. VERY fine work!

Along with this story your comments is the biggest pile of justified cow dung I have ever read.Listen.I'm no moralist but if a spouse decides.to do this basically on her own then that is probably where she would wind up.Did you drop acid when you where younger? Man what a space cadet.Quick question Vickie.If your spouse decided to do this to you unabated would your comment be the same? I thought so.

a pile of dung not worth reading

and yes I gave it a ONE STAR rating in honor of that whore bonnietaylor

She's a whore and he's just sad.

He would make out like a king if he divorce the whore...

... her dumb whorish face would've been a mess. He then should've forced her to write-over all her belongings before she would've been sent back to her lover to stay there forever.

Sadly he only was a cucky asshole.

This one should be in Gay and Lesbian - husband is obviously gay. In this category, one star only because we can't give out zero stars.

and fucked the fleet and you loved every minute of it. 5 for a good LW story.

and these over the top writings are such trite cliche stuff. Fact is you write well, why not pick a topic that doesnt disenfranchise 90% of your audience?

Is he right? What's the going rate for a chubby cunt these days?

Not sure if any man would actually put himself through that. She is no longer his wife but a back up and support she has got to think he is and idiot

Sadly, while you have imagination and writing ability you choose to use them to lower yourself to writing this over-the-top crud!

You may have done it to tease the readers or maybe you really have a fetish like this either way it's just a pathetic waste of talent. -1,000,000 *'s

This is just plain awful. One star is too much. Try harder xoxoxoxoAnnette

I think that this could have been, and could have set up a good and believable story. It doesn't. It's too drawn out for a legitimate parody, and it just drones on and on with no end to it's ridiculousness. She'd do this to him after 20 years, and more unbelievably, he'd accept it? Not hardly!

Just not at all realistic unless the guy was a total wuss. Yes, some men like their wives to fuck other men, but the way this went was not at all believable or likable.

Sorry, it stunk!

Terrible story. 1* at best

"If she was not back when I expected her I would fantasise about her being fucked by someone and then bring myself to a wonderful orgasm."

You obviously are a pathetically sad person. Anyone that could invest the time to write this utterly ridiculous garbage has such mental issues that it really isn't worth trying to move forward. No self image, no sex life, fighting gay desires, you could try therapy but I really doubt it will help. You really should just end it.

Thanks for your perceptive and inspiring comments. I've read and admired your stories for years. Getting a 5 from you is praise indeed.

I thought this was very well written but it is not possible to make a story about a self-obsessed and manipulative wife who humiliates her husband into something attractive. The same would be true if the genders were reversed.

and for that you deserve a 5! Good read

....Of the U.K.-cuck stories on this site. I usually do my level best to read an entire story, once started, both to see if something interesting may happen, the writer struck by a rare muse along the way, and out of respect for the writer's guts in submitting something to this most volatile of the categories. Within the first 5 lines, it was obvious where this one was going and equally clear that you had nothing new to offer, beyond a few token location and name changes.

Shame. If there is a story on this site worthy of change, this is it.

I swear to god if one of you ever shows so much as a scintilla of creative authority and takes this too oft repeated story somewhere else, offering more than the literary equivalent of a touch of cerulean blue to the overwhelmingly grey pallet of this story, I swear, I'll look you up and offer round trip airfare for you and one guest to Los Angeles and a night at the Bel Air and dinner at Il Pinguini, arguably the best Italian restaurant outside Italy on the planet....that is, of course if by then, I am still breathing and Sr. Mario and Donna Elisabet are still presenting.

I won't bother talking about editorial issues. There weren't enough to bother, but I cannot say there was anything remarkable about the presentation at all.

No. Thank. You.

Continue to do the same thing the same way, and you are very likely to get the same result. In this case, loud complaints and low scores. And to the arguably intellectually poverty-stricken commenters on both ends of the spectrum, nothing new here. The best response might be resounding silence.

As much as I would of wanted to smash his head in he probably should of gone along draining all accounts and secretly selling the house . Withdraw all cash and hit the road and stay hiding so she can't divorce you. Work off the books somewhere and start a new life fucking everything that would fuck you. She can keep her rich lover until he replaces her and she's left alone and broke. You can then shoe how great your life's been without her. After so many years maybe you could divorce for abandonment and infidelity. A pics before you left to show on the Internet and to all her family and friends just to show who the guilty party was.

I would really appreciate a warning up ahead. The poor doofus lost everything.

just a variation on the cuckold theme so popular among so many readers these days.

I do wish authors would have the courtesy to warn us, or the Tags were posted at the beginning, so those of us who detest this genre could avoid wasting our time.

WHILE YOU BLOW JIZZTEASE

What happened the love story. What you posted is just CRAP not some love story!

The first time she kissed him in public I would be gone.And I am swinger!

I am not into humiliation.Sorry.

Your scores would be higher if you had the cuck warning so that those of us who hate cuck stories would skip your story and not vote lower scores.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

to help the writer and support Bonnie in countering the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!!

"support bonnie..." LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

my god what a MORON... counter your whore mother, you dumb FAT MORON.

Good !

Husband aka idiot, divorce and move on period.

cuck shit.

“My mouth was open and she pushed her thongs in. I couldn't move my arms, so I couldn't extract them.” – Uh, you have a tongue? Push them out!

And eating the cream pie? Ugh! I'd kill both of them and go to the chair before I would do that!

I agree with the comment that just because a husband gets hard seeing his wife get fucked by another guy means that he “wants it”.

While I have a certain about of disgust at these guys, I CAN see how as much as you DON’T want it, and are angry at your wife’s cheating, that it MIGHT still be a sexy scene and turn you on. I would HOPE not, and would expect that you would shove those feelings aside and stand up and be man and not a wussy!

I hate control and humiliation in romantic and sexual situation. I know for some that is a turn on. It just pisses me off and makes me anger another human treats another human like that. Without respect and compassion. Been with kink communities and know there are those that argue in favor of such lifestyle choices. Cannot help it it is visceral for me to really dislike it. Oh well. Usually do not read such stories but the start of this one fooled me so I finished it. Nuts.

Just a stupid piece of trash that has no likable characters and absolutely no realism. There is no redemption for this story.

because of the eroticism that the writer portrays. I don't really like cuckold stories, but I started reading and had to see where the whore wife was taking this. If I were hubby, I would have slapped her so hard when she did come home, she would have been unable to think straight for 5 minutes. I'd have then showed her where I had burned all her clothing and possessions in the back yard. And tell her papers would be served to the "vice-president's" office Monday morning. It doesn't matter how much money she brought to the home, she destroyed the marriage.

Of course I grade on grammar and spelling too; only one mistake did I find. Interesting to see how this will end in part 2. I've read it this far, I just hope he "burns the bitch." She deserves no reconciliation.

How does this count as a love story? Seems like wife is a bitch and doesnt care about husband. Divorce would make this a love story.

You have certainly grabbed my attention and emotions with this twisted story. I for one would never stand for this type of relationship or actions in real life. However, I find your writing to be very well done- It has provoked some very strong feelings.

"you didn't try to stop me because you knew that it was what I wanted," - So, why didn't YOU stop yourself since you KNEW that was what HE wanted?

He was "disappointed" he didn't get to eat David's cream pie?!

Ugh! I could only skim the rest. As soon as she said he could only have weekends, he should have yanked off her ring (hopefully breaking her finger in the process!) and told her to keep her fucking weekends and never come back!!

The more she's with David the more she fancies her husband? No way. That is n't the way people work. If she's with David, she wants David. If she's in love with him, then she doesn't love her husband. She wouldn't make David choose living all together or losing her. She'd make her husband choose letting her be with David or leaving her husband. And eventually she would leave him anyway when David wanted her full time. And what husband would choose being the second man in his woman's life?

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck SHIT.

have a can of it for the efort to scribble it. Cheers!

Annette actually panned a story and I agree with her. Wonders never cease. What is this bonnietaylor thing that keeps posting in same thing three or four times in every story?

You are a piece of shit. Remove your ovaries and silt your wrist.

Your story is out of touch with reality. It's doubtful that either character would take to

dancing and screwing after just meeting. More development and character inter-

action is needed. As for the cuck, if you wanted to include pathetic into your story,

you've succeeded.

Are you 12? No sorry that's an insult to 12 year olds. This is just simplistic crap that's totally unbelievable even as a fantasy.

Just revolting characters and situations.

Just stupid weak and not worth 30 seconds of brain power. Just another cuck trying to convince real men to be weak and stupid like him. Real man would have thrown her to the curb on day one.

Cuckold central above us in the favorite section. Just another whore and her minion story. Where is the serial killer when you need them.

God, what a load feminist garbage! Didn't make it past the first page.

Debbie is very selfish.

I have mixed feelings for this story. On one hand I like storys where a husband ends with two women, it's one of my fantasys. So why shouldn't there be storys where a wife ends with 2 men. It is easier for one woman to satisfy 2 men than for one man to satisfy 2 women.

However, in threesomes with two wifes I like the women to be bi so that they can enjoy each other while in threesomes with 2 men I don't see the guys to be gay. I don't have anything against gay men, it's just nothing for me.

Furthermore, in this story the wife is just selfish and doesn't really care for the husbands feelings.

Somebody take this sad piece of shit's man card away.

THE REAL TITLE SHOULD BE “NO BALLS”.

Idiot story written by a real cuckold.