by touchmate
Fantastic , story!
Bring out the next chapter soon, can't wait!
Something wrong with the rating system, can't rate you (5Stars*****)
Very interesting, creative and well written!
Wonderfully erotic, both the two chapters! I have always enjoyed your stories but I believe these two are by far better and you are creating the plot and the characters excellently. Will look forward for more.
This is another twist-- Going fine--- :)