All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbor'

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Deep SoakerDeep Soakerabout 15 years ago
Hot seduction, weak advice

This was a hot story, although parts of it were weak.

If the neighbor was so hot and so ready to have sex with the main character, is it really believable that he was only her second lover?

Also, if she wanted to practice having sex with strangers, then some of his best advice should include talk about STDs and safe sex practices.

Finally, if she wants to have sex with men and later ask for money in exchange for her continuing to have sex with them, then when is she going to ask the main character for help with finances?

Please keep writing.

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